Short Film Pitch Feedback

In class today I presented a pitch that gave my classmates an idea of what I was going to do for my coursework. They had 3 things to fill in about my pitch; the strengths, weeknesses and what I could improve. Here is what they said about my short film pitch.

Strengths:

+ Confident actors

+ Could use a lot of technigues to get a high mark

+ Good music soundtrack

+ Easy to create e.g costumes, locations.

+ Twist at the end is interesting

+ Very detailed ideas for the visuals and structure of the short film

+ An organised choice of cast and soundtrack

+ Throught through for basic plot

Weeknesses:

- Sounds really complex and a bit cheesy

- The music

- Zoom in on Nayas eyes - zooms are very hard to do well

- Difficult to do on your own

Improvements:

~ Make sure you use copyright free music

~ Maybe dont use dialogue, it could be cheesy

~ Dont make it cheesy